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BASED ON A TRUE
STORY
Dedicated to : "Nadaan Parindey :: Rockstar" and " Wahan Kaun hain Tera :: Guide -Dev Anand"
She was a fashion
statement, fantasy of whole college even of professors. Being famous feels good,
but for time being, with the recognition it creates an unwanted centre of
attention which made Kheya sick of her college. She had more admirers than
friends and there was not a single person she could talk her heart out. Boys
always took the friendship wrong way and other girls couldn’t cope up with the
attention she used to get.
If you see from
her view, there was nothing wrong in what she did. She never told anyone she loved
them. We guys are always in hurry guessing, be it the size or anything else.
She was out spoken, had a figure that our heroines get after many Gym sessions
and painful surgeries. Her light brown
eyes could kill any professor but she deserved all grads she got, she was among
the toppers. If you trust rumours all credit goes to her short skirt & nice
tees but truly speaking it was not the only reason, she was intelligent too.
She tried to find
her dream boy in many but looks like her choices were wrong. From the
Basketball champ to the book-worm first boy, all guys were more engrossed in
her toned body and rounded things than her feelings, early or late she realised
it. Heart broke but the search went on, there was no dearth of candidates and
at last she said yes to Ryan.
The pair looked
perfect together and the scene broke many hearts. “Dil Todne ki Machine” was the perfect word for her. But every girl
fall in love someday so did she, and then madly. They became inseparable. A
love story started.
2 Years Later
“Life” is never easy, relationships specially; it takes years to make a bond and a phone
call to break. Why Ryan & Kheya broke up no one knew in detail but yes many
people felt happy, curse works, really
works. The black thread Ryan used to wear too couldn’t save them from the
evil’s eye. Eye candy girls especially like Kheya can’t remain alone and sad
for long, options are always waiting for them, a perfect side effect of increasing girl boy ratio.
The breakup was
still a heartbreaking feeling for Kheya but then Sam comes in her life. He hold
her when she needed someone by her side which helped her to come out of the
past with flying colours. They say naa a boy and girl can never be good
friends, yes at least in this case I see eye to eye. One day Sam proposes Kheya
and she didn’t see a reason to say no. Sam was more ‘understanding’ what she
felt. She didn’t say yes then and there but both of them knew the pink colour
was becoming pinker day by day. Another love story starts.
Life could have sailed
like this and I wouldn’t have been writing this post for my readers if not
there was a twirl. We all love twists as long as that occur to someone else’s
life. With time and good “food for thoughts” Ryan understands the little
mistakes (Little what he thinks) he did and try to get Kheya back unaware of
the fact that someone else already filled the position he left.
When a relationship
breaks both boy and girl suffer but the degree of endurance varies, may be the
80-20 rule applies here too. With Sam by her side life of Kheya was a colourful
one but Ryan’s comeback made the situation blazing.
What Kheya would do now? One side she feels Sam compliments her better than anyone else, he stayed
with her when no one else supported, but in split of second she feels she is
doing injustice to Ryan and the long time they spent together. Love has its own
pain but what is love actually ! Does that happen on the go?
Kheya had told me
one day “We all are hungry, greedy for love, we run to people who show this to
us.” How same Kheya who was so intelligent stands at this crossroad today?
I have heard love
helps us to excel and sacrifice then what is this? People would tag Ryan as
Tragedy King, Sam –he is no body in this scene, this person could be anyone if
not he. But all will blame Kheya for what she has done but what was her
mistake? Is not happiness her right? What if she dumps her old boy friend for a
better one? Don’t we dump old TV and buy
new slim LCD TVs ? Meaning of
promises and value of a person is different for different people and we can’t
force someone to think like we do. We never know what exactly went wrong.
Some people say
& many support “To be happy, we must not be too concerned with others”, who are these others? The one we
leave behind for our happiness? I would rather say don’t wish me happiness if
that cost to someone. I have gotten beyond that somehow. Wish me courage and strength
and a sense of humour. I will need them all. But that’s my personal feeling.
Questions are
many, Did Kheya try to solve conflicts between her and Ryan? Was Ryan aware
of the degrading condition of their relationship? What was Ryan’s mistake to make Kheya apart ? If he tried to resolve that why it didtn't happen? Who
is this Sam and how he won Kheya’s heart in such short span of time?
But for answers
we should ask ourselves, if we were a character of this story what we would
have done or rather do as in real life Kheya is in this crossroad?
What should Kheya do now?
Update : 18th December 2011
Update : 18th December 2011
Well written... nice flow of thoughts.
ReplyDeleteRead a Line Just now which fits here..
ReplyDelete"Less Love is Friendship
More Friendship is Love.."
OMG!!, didn't know you write so well, gr8 writing and food for thought!! Keep writing!!
ReplyDeleteSomewhere the every other working girl face the same problem today. More than desired attention from Multiple Male counterparts is very common. How will one girl choose who is better for her ?
ReplyDeleteAwesome story. Kheya needs to take a break. She has to believe in long term sustained commitment Vs compatibility of near future. Time gives all the reason and the way to clear the situation...
ReplyDeleteKeep writting. I'm eager to read more... :)
@Ashutosh : I don't know what other people will say but personally I support what you said. I don't want any more Kheya-Ryan Story to happen.(Sorry Sam Boss ! You are no where in this Story). Sam will too understand and move on.
ReplyDeleteWhat I feel, its a temporary phase and Kheya shall come out of it sooner or later. Girl like Kheya got lots of potential & dreams..
Kheya pursue Your dreams rather relations.
God i m dying now-u
ReplyDeleteshe is happy how-u ???????
Why this Kolavari Kolavari Kolavari Kolavaridi ?
Ha ha. Funny Soup Boys-u.
ReplyDeleteI am with u-u-u
Are you planning to write the story with Kheya's point of view ? Saw this note in sidebar. Then take these inputs, it might help.
ReplyDeleteConsider Kheya as an average girl , rather than what you described as Hot and Sexy.
Tell in your language what Kheya was looking for all her life ? I dont have to tell you how you will write this, You are good in this and with each post your fan club is spreading.
Last but not least write about the aspirations of the girl.
Looking forward for your next post.
Secret Admirer
Take a break.. permanent decisions shouldn't be made on temporary feelings....
ReplyDeleteI believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let them go,
ReplyDeleteand sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together.
But there is a problem, some good people get hurt in the process.
Pritu,
ReplyDeleteWe never knew we had a writer among us.
Keep writing man. Left job ? Or continuing that with writing ?
Write more posts man...
I feel although education is touching high in India, it's also giving birth to lots of confused people. Are we not open to advancement, giving to any relationship? The fact I see here for Kheya is, she's mostly at the "expecting" side, and not at the "giving side". Foolishly, management folks are taught to serve their clients well, build business relationship....not sure why they are failing on their personal front? Way to think Prits!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWhy Dedicated to : "Nadan Parindey :: Rockstar" ?
ReplyDeleteAnything special attached to your life ?
Someone called my by the name "Pritu" after real long. You must be someone from my college :)
ReplyDeleteNo though I want I can't leave my Job as of now.I earn in Rupee not in Dollar and Pounds. But surely I will keep writing.
BE/BCA/MCA/MBA Education doesn't make you Wise. Does it ?
Why "Nadan Parindey :: Rockstar" ? --- Tute Hue Dil se hi Sangeet Nikalta hain.
Dear, Only you saw this line in this whole post ?? Anyhow, This song is very close to my heart because of its The Passion, Emotion & Attitude.
Dard pahle se hai ziyada
ReplyDeleteKhud se phir yeh kia wada
Khamosh nazrein rahen be zubaan
ab na pahle si batein hain:(
bolo to lab thar tharate hain
raaz yeh dil ka na ho biyaan
ho biyan ke asar koi hum pe nhai
humsafar mein to hain husafar hai nahi:(
dooor jata raha pass ata raha
kham khaa be waja khaw bunta raha
I believe, any relationship will have ups and downs...no amount of love can avoid these 'downs'. Love gives you the strength to bear the down phase and the faith that things will be good again - and that helps you to be with the same person even at the worst of things. Those who run away while relation is in a down phase actually don't love or are not loved.
ReplyDelete@Debdatta : Love ? What is that ? If that really exists then such situations doesnt happen. Education (read higher studies) has produced a set of "Confused Individuals" who think their "thinking" grew as their salaries and they become free to take any decision.
ReplyDeleteThere is a saying is SW industry ::: "When you give more value to your client than your friends you know the Manager role is not Far".
@Pritam: U r right..if love exits such situation doesn't happen...that's y I said if such situation existed between them then true love was not there from either or both the sides :)
ReplyDelete@Pritam..and u asked what is love...I feel it consists of everything that wont let two people get apart. Now that is very relative...I can't define that for u and vise versa.
ReplyDelete@Debdatta : Yes you are right. The term itself is "very relative" and Situation change . Anyhow There are some people who are not like "Kheya and Ryan" and I am happy for them :)
ReplyDeleteEven the good thing is not good for all, Even the Bad is good for some one.
@Pritam : Yes Yes..and in this 'relative' world...u can't tag anything right or wrong. Things tend to be simple when two person in 'LOVE' have a common definition of it :)
ReplyDelete@Debdatta : You are right...
ReplyDelete"Aasole Sotti Bole Sotti Kichu nei" --- There is nothing called Absolute Truth.
We modify its meaning according to our need.
Pits
ReplyDeletei dont know about the real Kheya, but my story is somehow like the same.
And i got lots of inspiration from you Pits.
Kheya
I read the whole series but there is not a point from Sam.
ReplyDeleteHe is a real life person too with Emotions .
Suppose I am a guy like 'Sam' in your story. And now a girl like Kheya is with me...
But dont know why I feel she could not forget her past yet.
may be she doesnt talk to him anymore but she does miss him and think about him, that I can tell for sure.
A smile is missing from her life.. Now I feel bad.. What I shall do..
Pritam
I am asking you this because I know you can understand this
If you have time reply me here, I will check this space..
@ Sam or what ever your name
ReplyDeleteDon't take my words harshly.
Tell me what is the Girl-Boy ratio in your office ? So if not you then someone else would be more eager to become another "Sam" without knowing the consequences.
Helping someone is good,supporting someone emotionally is even better but if there was a slight chance that Kheya would have realised the problem between her and Ryan and could give it another chance and just because of You it didn't happen then Boss, I am sorry... U have done something seriously wrong and this guilty feeling wont leave you anytime.......
"Jinke Ghar seeske hote hain, Woh Dusre ke Ghar par Pattar Nehi Maarte "
Pritam
ReplyDeleteWhat to do now then ?
I don't know about others, but I never though of same kind of situation .
I though everyone have a past, and its ok with be friendly with some one and when that became an obsession I didn't understand.
Have I done seriously something very wrong ?
Really man curse work.
Dear Sam
ReplyDeleteYou are not alone. I am in a condition more or less like yours but the difference is that I came in her life long after her beakup but what bothers me is that so often she would say "Rohan was better in this.." I am fed up Man. And if I say her something it agiates her and she feels sorry for her past.
Again this post is gaining momentum.
ReplyDeleteReading last few comments it seems to me,some people realized what they have lost .
Wish them happy soul searching.
Pritam
Whats coming next ?
Lol.. I laughed so much on If I could Kill Rohan's reply.
ReplyDeleteReally if I were at your situation, i wld have felt the same
Sympathy and please dont kill Rohan...
U are so true Pritam
ReplyDeleteThe bigger problem is here